Ranbir Kanya story: My version of Kuchh Iss Tara
Episode 1
Mallika has orderes Ranbir again to go to Godbole’s house as punishment.
Godboles have gone for a funeral of some distant relative. Since Kanya cannot face fire they keep
So now at Godbole's....
She is surprised. Goes to the dining and finds Ran having a cup of tea and watching TV!
Ran : Good Morning! Come have a cup of tea.
Ran : Nahi. Natasha aayi thi.Chaay bhi banayi aur muzse pyaar bhi kar gayi....Of course
Ran : I have changed. and changed for good. I can make tea .... can cook also!
Ran : tum hasti ho to acchha lagata hai. ( she looks at him with a smile) but roti ho to aur bhi acchha lagata hai. (
Ran : Yes I am ! and am proud to be one. At least i do what i want. not like u ... Puppet... director ke isharepe chalti ho, usike ishraepe hasti ho , nachti ho.
Ran : Shanta, Pooja and Chunnu ( to himself- Shani, rahu and ketu- ye kab hatenge hamari kundlise>>> )
Ran : Theek hai to samzao. Pyaar kya hota hai?
Ran : Jaise bina bataye Ran knows Kanya likes Mogra and bina kahe Kanya knows Ran needs her hand after the kabaddi debacle....
Ran : I was just joking Yaar. tum serious ho gayi.Apni to contract marriage hai, to pyaar ka sawaal hi nahi!
Ran : Oh yes! he knows a lot! i think now too he is explaining the same to Archie!!!
Ran : I never said anything.
Ran : Just now u said i don't know what luv is. so y should i be jealous? that too with Chunnu? .....not even my level.
Ran :
Keeps her cup down
Ran : apna gussa chaaypar mat nikalo. Pi lo. have
Ran : oh so u r so thin....malnourished! Batonse hi pet bharata hai tumhara! actually u should go to Somaliya. I am making a documentary on malnourishment ...i'll feature u... u r absolutely fit for that.
Ran goes into nostalgic mood .... remembers their first meeting!
Ran : oh no! Not again! ek baar gala pakda to ye chipkhali gale pad gayi. ab pakdogi to ye saand saat janam gale pad jayega .... sooch lo....
Ran : oh come on . Mazak bhi nahi samazti.tum roti ho to bilkul acchha nahi lagta.
Ran takes her in his arms and kisses her tears!
Ran : tabhi to tumhare aasu pochhaneka chance milta hai na!!!!
Episode 2:
They are very bored at home.So Ranbir asks Kanya for a long drive with him. She agrees to go out with him only on one condition that once her parents r back he would go to stay in a hotel and leave her alone …..
On the way there are heavy rains….their car breaks down! They have to stay in the car in dark night with heavr rains outside and there is thunder and lightening….Kanya gets scared and holds Ranbir tight and goes into his arms!
He looks into her eyes and she too looks into his eyes , for a moment there is silence! and then
Ran : Tum Kya dekh rahi ho?
we r ....
Ran : ( Cuts her sentence) kya theek nahi hai. ek patnika pati ki bahon mein hona agar theek nahi to is duniyaki kaoi bhi cheez sahi nahi!
Ran : to kya hai? batao hamare rishteka naam kya hai?
Ran : kyon rah rahe hai saath saath? Kyon nahi keh deti mummy papa se yeh contract marriage hai? kisne roka hai? ab to saare problems solved hai. na tumhare upar Devikaka karja hai , na tumhare Bhai Behen ki job ka problem hai .... to kyon nahi batati sabko?
Ran : batao na Kanya, kya hai yeh sab? I am fed up yaar! what's
Ran : yeh tumhe naatak lagata hai? ab kaun hai is veeran raastepar jo main unke saamne naatak karu? yeh jo ab ho raha hai...... jara apne dil se poochho ek baar... kya yeh naatak lagata hai tumhe?
( Ran just closes his eyes: to himself what shall i do now?)
kaise samzau yaar tumhe? kya tumhe aaj tak ek pal ke liye bhi nahi laga ki yeh tumhara saand abhi saand nahi raha.Poora badal chuka hai.
Tumhise to hasana seekha
( Ran just tries to get composed. )
Please Kanya, bas ek baar... bas ek baar meri aankhomein dekho aur kaho ki main zootha hun.... tum phir bhi muze zootha kahogi to main yeh rishta aage ........
( Just then there is a loud thunder and huge lightening. Kanya is scared to no end and without thinking holds Ran tightly.Ran just takes her in arms and strokes his hand on her head!)
Ran : mere hote hue kyon darati ho? bas tumhare saare dar, saari tensions muze de do.... aur tum bas hasati raho. ( Lifts her chin and looking at her face) pata hai na tumhe, tum meri chaand ho... hasti ho to lagata hai chaaron taraf sitare chamak uthe hai.....music baj raha hai.....kahise ghantiya sunayi deti hai!!!!!
Kanya opens her eyes ... looks into his eyes.... both r lost in each other...
( tum se hi in the background)
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Ran and
Episode 3 :
Ran : Kanya , r u alright? r u ok dear?
Ran : ab kyon dar rahi ho? Main hun na yehan!
Ran : Kanya, sach kahun to muze bhi dar lag raha hai.kahi...kuch.. aaj...
( suddenly there is lightening and Kanyas' eyes shine.the innocent look brings Ran to his senses.)
Ran : nahi Kanya, daro mat. yeh sach hai ki hum pati patni hai par jab tak hum agniko sakshii rakh ke saat phere nahi lete yeh rishta hum aisehi nibhayenge jaise aaj tak nibhaya hai.
Ran looks at her. slowly releases himself.
Ran : Galat mat samazna. par jab hamari court marriage ho rahi thi aur panditji muzse vachhan le rahe the , actually I was wrong.
Ran : yehan dekho Kanya, meri taraf. Aaj yehan sirf tum , main aur ye baarish hai. Upar aakash hai, neeche zameen hai. Inko sakshi rakh main tumhe vachhan deta hun ki sirf is janam mein hi nahi balki saato janam mein tumhare saath rahunga, meri saari khushiya aajse tumhari aur tumhare saare gham mere.
Ran : Kya hua? ruk kyon gayi?
Ran : Hey! u have to. dekho aaj yeh hamari sachhe dil se shhadi ho rahi hai.
Ran : Kya?
Ran : Yaar, at least tumne bachhe paida karneka to vachhan diya tha na? it's ok if they all r bald!! main to vaise bhi baalonki dukaan hun. le lenge baal merese!
( They both smile. )
Ran: kanya, chalo jab tak baarish rukti nahin aur raat katati nahin hum baaten karaten hai. achha lag raha hai.
Ran is shocked. but Kanya is smiling...
Ran : yeh jab tum hasati ho na...
Ran : aur jab tum gussa hoti ho
Ran ; nahi! actually tum gussa hoti ho na to main mera dil kho baithta hun yaar!
Ran : ha! peheli baar jab gussese tumne gala pakda tha mera..... bas pyaar ho gayaa... aaj tak samaz nahi pa raha tha....par aaj samaz raha hun. kanya, i can't believe it. u r with me for all my life... i just can't believe it.ek jorse pinch karo na.main aankhe band kar raha hun
Ran shouts loudly and gets up
Ran : han ... sapna to dekha par bahot sweet tha! subah honeko aayi hai. is time ke sapne sachhe hote hai.
Ran : ki hamare saare bachhe ganje hai....
Both laugh........
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Godboles are back! Mallika rings Pummy and asks her to force Ranbir and Kanya to go to the Farm House so that they can get some privacy! Pummi likes the idea! Gets successful in her plan to send them alone to the farm house!
Episode 4 :
At The farm house :
Ran : to ab kya muze lori sunani padegi?
Ran : mazak uda rahi ho na! par dekho main challenges leta hun. darata nahi. tumne gaane ko kaha
Ranbir Nanda kabhi ran chhodke bhagta nahi. after all my name is RANBIR --- jo hamesha ran pe veer banata hai--- he is always the winner u know! jaise aajbhi iss chipkhaliko jeet liya hai
Ran : Kaisi.... soyi hui volcano ho tum. gussese toot padti ho to tumhare lava mein to meri to raakh ho jati hai!!!!! dikhti to ho walking X Ray film but nuclear bomb ho nuclear bomb!
Ran : Ha! janata hu. mein to saand hu, genda hu.... arre par ye to sab iss planet se hi hai!.... e tum confuse mat karo yaar! ya to muze alien kaho ya to saand! vaise to muze dono bhi pasand hai ..... :
Ran : muze to apni har baat yaad hai. woh tum coffee shop mein itni gussa hui thi.... agar shanta aur pooja tumhne nahi rokte to tum to muze khaa hi jaati...
actually i was so stunned that day.... i thought I would.........
Ran : no ... tum thappad marogi.
Ran : tum janati ho na, tum jab gussa hoti ho to mein to apna dil kho baithta hun.
Ran : Batau? Marogi to nahi?
Ran : (looks at her..).... dum lagake bhaag jaata.....
Ran :... woh to Aditya bhaiya ne pakada muze! nahin to tumhari jaisi sherni .... mera matlab chipkhali...jaharili...
she attacks Ran with all her force...Ran holds her hands....
Ran : Arreee... Kya kar rahi ho? limit nahi cross karana.....irada kya hai tumhara? ...... kahi R>A>P>E>.....
Ran : lava phoot raha hai kya? to mein bhaag jata hu.
Ran : batau kya ho
Ran : ( his voice is husky) Ranbir kabhi ran chhodke nahi bhagta. ...and he is always a winner....
Ran : nahi chhoda to kya karogi?
Kisses him on his cheek.Ran is shocked! leaves her...
Ran is stunned. Touches his cheek. to himself: such Kanya,
In the morning.......
No response! Ranbir.... ( gets up from bed. knocks at the bathroom door. r u there?
No response!
Ranbir....
Finds a servant
Saab kidhar hai?
Woh to swimming pool gaye.
Ran : Hi! Good morning! aana hai paani mein?
Ran : arre main hu na! aa ja! just for fun. jyada deep water mein nahi jaana
Ran : arre aao na. dekho nahi aayee to mein uthakar launga andar paanimein!
Ran comes out of pool. He looks ultimate.
Episode 5 :
Both Ran and
Ran : Khao na Kanya, jaldi jaldi. Phir ghoomne chalenge. kitna kum khati ho. Sach much Chipkhali ki tarah!
Ran : to juice lelo.aisi bhookhi rahogi to log kahenge mein tumhara khayaal nahi rakhta!
Just then Kanya's cell Rings
Ran : ab kisko tumhari yaad ayee? hamein akele kyon nahi chhodte?
Pooja : kaisi ho Kanya? woh Ranbir tumhen taklif to nahin deta na?
Pooja : Kya? to tum akeli ho? how dumb he is. tuze akeli udhar itne bade farm house par chhodkar woh kahan
pooja: Oh! aur tum
Pooja : I know Kanya. u must be bored. Ye mallika aunty bhi na ... kya zaroorat thi tumhen udhar bhejneki? tum fikr mat karana. Jaise hi tum wapas aoge main Mummy papase tumhare divorce ki...
Ran looks at her with the word DIVORCE.. Sprinkles water on
Pooja : Kya hua?
Pooja : Paani?
Pooja : tum itni najdeek baithi ho. door ho jaao! girogi nahi to.
Pooja : arre ruk Shantu wants to talk to u
Ran is getting restless.
Ran takes her phone
Shanta: Kyon ri Kanya woh genda tuze pareshaan to nahi kar raha?
Ran : ( Gabbarsinh ki aawaajmein)Ha Shantatai bahot pareshaan kar raha hai. Kya karegi aap? idhar to aap aa nahi sakti aur Kanya yehase ja nahi sakti. HUHAHAHA!!!!! Bahut nainsafi hai......
Kanya takes the phone tum bhi na ranbir..
Ha Shantatai, main mazeme hu.
Shanta : arre woh gendeko kya hua?
Shanta : Kya? eh Kanya, bachhke rehena! woh Khatarnaak hai!
Ran looks at
Kanya starts laughing... (wispers)Oh Ranbir Chup bhi karo na!
Shanta : are kya hua?
Ranbir , yeh kya kar rahe the tum ? unko shak ho jaata to?
Ran : to achha hi hota. muze to un donose bada revenge lena hai.
Ran : kitni taklif di hai un donone tumhare gharpar muze? main to ek ek cheez ka badala lunga
Ran : ab wapas rona mat shuru karna. par yeh to sach hai ki i was very upset! Kanya, Shanta tai ka to kuchh nahi. after all she is that type.... but Chunnu.... mere to pav tale zameen hi khisak gayi thi. har roj lagata tha ki main tumhe kho raha hu.... but I am Ranbir u know! always a winner!!!
Ran : ek baat kahu Kanya.... Bachpan ki dosti aur ab ki dosti... fark hota hai... aur phir usne kuchh baate aisi kahi thi.... Chhodo na ... ab to tum mere paas ho na.... ab to
Ran ; kuchh nahi Forget yaar! Hum apne baremein sochte hai na
Ran : kanya chhodo na... chalo hum ghoomke aate hai
ran : kanya please!
Ran : Oh to yeh volcano ab ...
Ran takes Kanya's hand in his hands.
Kanya, actually usne muze challenge diya tha ki ....( closes his eyes)main tumhe sabke saamne KISS karu.... nahi to woh tumhe Kiss karega!
Kanya is shocked.Her face looks pale...
Ran : kaise batata? Hum itne nazdeek to the nahi. aur Chuunu to tumhara best friend! tum shhayad muzpar wishwas hi nahi karti. par i was very upset!
Yeh to saaf tha ki I would have never kissed u .... Kyonki woh huq to tumne muze dena hai ! but I was worried if he....
Ran : isiliye main nahi bata raha tha. Dekho ab
Ran : Oh Kanya, batau aisa kya hai tummain? Mombatti jaise Pav hain, Udbatti jaise Haath hai aur yeh chipkhali sa muh hai.... (takes her in his arms.).. par woh sab muze bahot pyare hai!!! (kisses her tears)... aaj tumne namak jyada dala tha kya? yeh aasu to bahot hi salty hai. thoda kum dalti jjao! nahi to BP badhega
Ran : bas aisihi hasati raho.... ab aaj ke baad sirf sochna hai humare baremein.........oh Mrs Nanda.... chaliye...
Har ghadi badal rahi.....
At the farm house : Kanya on bed : unconscious. Ran sitting next to her. Doctor examining her
Episode 6 :
Doc : Don't worry Mr. Nanda
Ran : but isse hua kya hai?
Doc : mere khayalse shaayad woh kisi cheejse dar gayi hogi
Ran : aisi to koi baat nahi thi
Doc : to phir Hypoglycemia hoga....
Doc leaves.
Ran calls his doctor friend in AIIMS,
Ran : Hi Aakash! It's
Dr.
Ran : i am fine. Actually meri wife ki problem hai
Dr Aakash: Hey! i heard that u got married! who is this lucky one? and what's her problem?
Ran looking at Kanya explains,
Dr Aakash: Ranbir I give u my friend's cell no. he is a Neurologist at B'bay Hospital. Just go and see him tomorrow.
Ran : do u feel this is something serious?
Dr Aakash: see Ranbir, some times some smaller things turn out to be grave. It's better to rule out everything. Aur phir ab to medical science aur technology itne advanced ho gaye hai....
Ran : Aakash, tell me yeh kuch serious hai kya. y r u talking all this?
Dr. Aakash : Ranbir, yaar tu to poora change ho
ok! Bye! I'll get back to u, ok!
Kanya is coming back to senses! Ran calls her
Kanya.... Kanya.....Chipkhali...he puts his hand in her hair, Kanya , aankhe kholo na! muze darr lag raha hai ab!
Oh Mrs. Ranbir Nanda, Please ...
She opens her eyes!!!
Ran just takes her in his arms. Kitna bolti ho. Chup ho jaao. his eyes r watering.
Ran : Kuchh nahi . par waapas iss tarahse muze pareshaan kiya to dekhna. chhodunga nahi main tumhein!
Ran : HYPOGLYCEMIA
Ran : Yeh beemari nahi hai. Husband ko taklif deneka bahana hai. Kuchh khati, peeti nahi aur phir kumjorise chaakkar aati hai tumhe! Kya kahenge tumhare mummy papa ki main tumhara koi khayaal hi nahi rakhta! kitna kaha tha subah theekse khao par sunti kaha ho?
Ran : to kya karu? Itna dara deti ho!
Ran puts his hand on her mouth
Ran : Chup kar! waapas aisi baat ki na...(takes her in his arms). Kanya, kal hum ek achhe doctor ke paas jayenge!
Ran : tum kuchh nahi bologi. kal humein jaana hai
Ran : Kya?
Ran looks at her. tumne muze bataaya nahi.
Ran : achha to aapko privacy chhahiye? kya karegi aap?
Ran : to kya tha?
Ran :
Next moment she gets up and kisses Ranbir on his lips .... they get lost . Ranbir holds her properly and kisses her ......the kiss continues.....
Tumse hi at the background
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Episode 7 Break ke Baad........
front of mirror. Ran just comes in. gets immediately hot with the smell....goes near her
Looks into the mirror to her ......
Ran : u look so ....
Ran : so mean!!!! Ha ha ha ha!!!bahot kharab ho tum.
Ran : woh kya hai na... kuchh baaten apne haath mein nahi hoti.... jaise... jaise...( takes her hair in front.... watches the black mark on her neck.... and kisses her on the mark)
Ran : PYAAR!
Ran : dekho kitni kharab ho! inta achha mood tha aur beech mein....
Ran : Ha! actually tumhare gharpe
Ran : pata nahi... par tum thi na! aisi tut padi thi? jorse boli kya dekh rahe ho to muze to laga school ki masterni khadi hai saamne!
Ran : bahot! kya kya kiya hai tumne mere saath. darr to lagega hi na!
Ran : arre wah! bhool gayi? sabke saamne party mein juice feka tha mere muh par. mere itne sunder baal saare kharaab kar diye the. aur woh bhi guava juice... jo muze bilkul pasand nahi.
Ran : Kanya, kya ho
Ran :actually mein baar baar tumhen pareshaan kar raha tha kyonki lagata tha ek din to tum zaroor mere paas aogi,sorry kahogi....request karogi ....aur phir us bahaane humari dosti ho jayegi...... actually tumne juice feka to Mom boli thi tumhise maine mere baal wash karne the! ek pal ke liye to I got excited with the thought u washing my hair......
Ran: par tum to bahot sakht thi! jab bhi aayi, sorry...request to door.... muze hi sunati gayi.
Ran : of course! par tum kaha aayi? aayi to bhi poochh ko saath leke...
shantatai!!!! aur Mom ke accidentke baad hospital mein mili..... oh my God! kya sunaya tha....
actually ek secret baat batau....
Ran : par sach batao Kanya, un dino to tum muzse bahot nafrat karati thi. Kya aaj bhi tumhare dil ke kisi konemein woh nafrat hai?
Ran : Nahi but phir bhi. kabhi kabhi darr lagata hai. kahi woh humara past... parchhai ban kar humari zindgimein ...
Ran : (takes her in his arms). U r so nice! wapas keheta hu please muze maaf karo un dinoke liye!...
chalo aaj nahi jaate doctor ke paas! tumhe mere saath akele rehena hai na....
( To Himself : iss tarah se baate karenge to shaayad iske dil mein chhipi hui nafrat ... dard.... sara kuchh door ho jayega!. Ranbir, u r RANBIR! u have to win ! yes kanya, I'll cure u. after all tum to meri ZINDGI ho!)
She is in his arms.
they hear a song from somewhere....
Ek din aap humko yu mil jayenge
Phool hi phool raho mein khil jayenge
Ran : sach ... to gaaona mere liye... tum to itna achha gaati ho
Ran : woh to mazak tha! actually Suhas bhi janta hai mein to us din tumhara gana sunkar apne aapko hi bhool
Kanya starts singing....
Dil ki dali pe kaliya si khilne lagi
Jab nigahe nigahonse milne lagi
( They hold each other and do Waltz!)
Ek din iss tarah hosh kho jayenge
Paas aye to madhosh ho jayenge
Ek din zindagi hogi itni haseen
zoomega asmaan gayegi yeh zameen
( Song credit : Yes Boss!)
End of Episode 7........
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pisode no 8
B'bay hospital. Ran sitting in Dr. Anand's ( Neurologist) cabin.All reports r there on table
Dr Anand : Hello Mr. Nanda. So here r all reports. I have studied
Ran looks worried.
Ran : is there any problem Doc?
Dr Anand : well Mr Nanda I would say there is a good news and a bad news!
Ran looks further worried! he feels his heart beating fast. forehead sweating!
Dr. Anand : Mr. Nanda see all her reports r normal.
Ran looks relieved. so that is a good news! that means she doesn't have an organic cause for her illness! I mean no tumour or bleeding etc in her brain!
Ran : but then doc what is the problem?
Dr Anand : That exactly is the bad news Mr Nanda! Because now we can't find the cause! i mean it is beyond our understanding! so it has to be something related to her MIND . and let me tell u Mr Nanda Human Mind is the most complicated thing! I don't think Medical science has really done much progress in that field!
Ran looks really depressed!
Ran : Doc I won't mind taking her to anywhere ... I mean in any part of the world.... but I want her to be out of this!
Dr Anand : See Mr Nanda, in that case I would say then the best treatment is here in
Ran still looks tense but soon he gets composed.
Thank u doctor. I promise u . I'll do it!
Dr Anand : Yes my friend! Wish u all the best. But i am sure ... 100 % u will do it for I can see that in
Back at the Farm House
Kanya on bed. Ran gets tea for her
Ran : Hi! Uth gayee. Chalo Chaay le lo!
Ran : woh test inte the. koi bhi thak jata!
Ran : Actually bhookh nahi hai
Ran : are woh pareshaan ho jaate na! aur ab tum to meri ho na. sach kahu to main bhi thoda swarthi hu! i don't want to share u with
Ran : absolutely normal hai.
Ran : kanya, ab tum Chaay pi lo. Biscuits kha lo. doctor ne yahee bataya ki tumhe jyada khana peena hai!
actually unhone to bas itna kaha hai ki tum tension jyada leti ho! par ab to humne decide kiya hai ki tumhare saare tensions, saare darr tum muze gift karogi..... then
Ran : pata hai kaise itni achhi banati hai?
Ran : usmein shakkar ki jagah mera pyaar dala hua hai!
Ran :Oh God ! so again now u r starting with N and .....ending with Y...
....Kisses her on her lips lightly!
Ok ho gayi ab meethi?
Ran : ab yeh kaise ho sakta hai? his eyes get wide open! Oh No. holds the biscuit in his mouth. Kanya comes closer and takes a bite from his ...
He holds her.
Ran : Kitni bad maash ho. us din bhi aisi hi badmaash ..! pehele to cake ka piece khud hi kha gayi thi! aur next piece.....
Ran : kya ? bolona!( looks mischivous) by the way woh to
( Kanya blushes.. )
U should have seen Pooja aur Shantatai’s face!
Ran : Me too! so called our first......
Ran :Chalo ab tum wash leke taiyaar ho jaao. Hum ghoomne chalte hai aur bahar hi khakar aayenge!!
Aur Kanya tum wahi saari pehenna jyo us din peheni thi!
Ran : Cakewale din!
Ran : Nahi!
Ran :Saari ke andar ki koi pasand hai!!!( he winks his eye)
Ran : main to bas…! See I am a thorough gentleman!
Ran : oh no! tum samaz gayi thi. Muze laga….. tum nahi samzogi! Ek to itni sunder dikh rahi thi tum ki …
Ran : arre baba I agree! Hum to aapse poore Ghhayal… Paagal… aur kuchh kehena hai? Jyo kahana hai kah do! par ek to tumhe manana padega aapko bhi to humne jeet liya hi liya!aap bhi to abhi paagal ho gayi na...humare pyaarmein!
Both get ready .Kanya looks gorgeous in her saari. Ranbir just stares at her. She shakes her hand in front of his eyes! He pulls her closer and the walk to their car…. As Kanya is abt to enter the car…. The old dumb lady suddenly comes and hugs Kanya.
Kanya shouts loudly. Ran comes running .the lady touches Kanya everywhere with a lot of love! Ran just keeps on looking at her.
Kanya is stunned!… Ranbir goes closer. The lady moves away . Takes Ranbir’s hands in her hands . tries to tell sumthing…. Looks at Kanya! Takes her hand and gives in Ranbir’s hand. Looks at both of them……
Ranbir looks at kanya.
Both of them touch the lady’s feet and take her blessings…………the lady’s eyes r flowing……
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Episode No 9 Break ke baad .....
At the Farm house in the bed room of Ran And Kan : Night time
Both look tired
Ran : Kanya, So jaao jaldi. Thak gayi hogi
Kan : ( Smiles)Tum bhi to jyada thake dikh rahe ho
Ran : Nahi aisi koi baat nahi.( Ranbir looks tense)
Kan : kya baat hai Ranbir, tum pareshan ho aur muzse kuchh chhipa rahe ho.
Ran : arre nahi yaar.main to woh apne dinner ka soch raha tha! by the way did u like the food? tum veg ho na?
Ran : ya! I thought u may not like me eating nonveg.... aur phir woh Gomutra bhi yaad aya to ... Oh God! what a torture it was !
Ran : par muze batao kya zarurat thi tumhe itne muze pareshaan karane ki?
Ran : tum kyon gussa thi?
Ran : woh muze kya pata tha Archie behen hai tumhari! muze laga....
Ran : Kya laga? arre I was sure u would never believe all that! tum to janati thi na
Ran :
Ran : arre she is blind . hota hai hota hai Pyaarmein to sabhi blind ho jaate hain na! mein nahi kya ho
Ran : Kanya tumne mera naam badal diya hai kya? baar baar badmaash bolti ho. This is not fare! i tell u, Patni ne patni ki haisiyat se rehena chahiye! Limit mat cross karana! Pyaar mein ho iska matlab yeh nahi ki respect karana chhod do!!
Kanya looks at him. gets shocked. feels very sad! starts crying.
Ran :rone lagi? That's like a good girl. aao ab aasu pochhta hu. Subahse chance nahi mil raha tha na? to
He just takes her in arms , starts kissing her tears! R u mad Kanya? inta bhi mazak nahi samazti tum?
Ran : Kanya, aise kaise sochti ho? u r part of me now! main to hum donoko alagh samazta hi nahi. we r one dear, to main kaise chhod sakata hu tumhen? main kabhi apne aap se alagh ho paunga? tum to meri Zindgi ho .ro mat ! so jaao ab. aur a big SORRRRRRRRYYYYYY!!!
Ran takes her with him. makes her sleep. starts moving his hand in her hair. Kanya, neend nahi aa rahi?
Ran : to chalo kuch baatein karate hai.
Ran : I don't know who she is.pata hai jab
Ran : Yaad karo kanya, kahi tum use janati to nahi?
Jab hum sab picnic ke liye aye the, unhone aisehi muze gale lagaya tha. woh to Papa Mummy ne muze unse chhudwaya. but that time too i felt ki woh muze pyaarse choo rahi thi!
Ran : Us waqt woh tumhen kab mili thi? din mein ya raat mein?
Ran : aaj bhi muze aisa hi laga. woh muze kuchh bata rahi thi! . aisa laga ki woh tumhe kisise bacha rahi hai. muze keh rahi hai ki meri Kanyako bachao! usko akeli mat chhodo. pata nahi.... kuchh andarse laga muze ... jaise....aur I touched her feet... jab dekha to usi waqt tum bhi....
Ran : chalo Kanya jyada socho mat. tum theek keh rahi ho... humein to koi problem nahi hai. actually she needs our help! kal hum use kuch madad karenge. ok? tum ab so jaao!
Kanya goes into Ranbir's arms and sleeps like a small baby!
Ranbir thinks to himself... sach woh lady muze kya batana chahti hai? kahi Kanya ke iss problem ke baaremeni to nahi? us video mein to ye saaf dikh raha tha ki Kanya ... i mean Natasha use mili thi raatmein! Kanya to use din mei bhi mili thi! yaane The lady knows Kanya is Natasha! . and she loves Kanya .... so she loves Natasha as well! Is she related to Natasha? If Natasha is part of Kanya Kanya's parents should know her! phir Papane use hakal kyon diya? ..... questions... questions ... and questions!
Yeh kya paheli hai? I am getting confused! par meri Kanya ko theek karne ke liye yeh paheli to muze sulzani hi hai.... kahi yeh aurat is paheli ko chudwaneki chabi to nahi?
Ranbir takes his laptop! makes a new file " PAHELI"
starts writing his thoughts! he gets engrossed in writing one after the other! tries to find links bet each of the things.He gets very disturbed for he cannot find links!. I think I should sleep now. he keeps the laptop away... switches
off the lamp and tries to sleep.
Just then he hears a sound. he looks towards Kanya.......
Kanya gets up from the bed.... looks thr' the window..... there is a candle lighting outside.... kanya moves from the window....starts walking... Ran gets up ...he calls her twice Kanya... kanya... Kanya keeps on walking!
Ran gets a bit scared. he follows her... she goes out. the lady is standing out with the candle in her hands. Kanya looks steadily at the candle... the lady holds Kanya's hand... and both start walking......
Ran tries to call kanya but to his surprise he cannot say a word! as if somone is choking his throat.... he tries again but he feels very weak and sits downon the ground as if he has lost all his strength..... ......
End of Episode 9.......
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Episode 10 :
Early Morning hrs.it's still dark outside! Kanya gets up . Puts her hand by the side . Looks surprised. Then looks by the side.
Ran is not on bed!
(knocks at the bathroom door) r u there? Ranbir....No reply!
Kanya starts looking for him. comes out of the room
Ranbir... kaha ho tum? arre koi hai?
The house looks completely suna suna... no one around.
Arre koi hai ? kanya is almost in tears! kaha gaye sub log? Goes to kitchen. finds nobody. Comes out and starts going towards the swimmimng pool
Yeh ranbir bhi na subah subah swimming karane nikalata hai.
Reaches swimming pool. Ranbir is not there.
Kanya is frightened now!
Ranbir... Shouts loudly... Ranbir... Kaha ho tum ? starts crying now....
Arre mera mobile? my god woh to bedroom mein hi rah
starts walking back to bedroom.
there is pin drop silence! wind is blowing.
Ahhhh...........
Kya hai? un....un..... kaun hai?
She slowly looks behind her on the ground and finds Ranbir lying on the ground.........
Tries to move him . he is so heavy . when she tries to pull him... she falls back....
yeh to sach much saand hi hai... Ranbir utho na baba.... aaj koi nahi hai idhar... tum bahar akar kyon soye? chalo na...
Ranbir does not move. she gets afraid. Runs to the kitchen gets some water. sprinkles on Ran's face.....he doesn't get up. pours the whole glass of water on his face
Ranbir gets up! gets irritated
Ran : arre kaun hai? arre kya kar rahi ho?
Ranbir looks at her.
Ran : Kanya.... tum wapas aa gayi? looks at her. Touches her face
R u ok? kab aayi tum?
Ran : Kya? tum kahi nahi gayi?
Ranbir looks worried!
Ranbir, tum theek to ho na? kya ho
Ran : shaayad
In the Dining:
Ran : Kanya, jara idhar baitho na. sach kaho tum kal raat kahi nahi gayi?
servant gets tea for them.
Servant : Mein to yehi tha memsaab.
Servant : mein to kitchen mein hi tha. Raamu chacha ka mein bhanja hu. we bole kuchh din muze cooking samalneko!
Ran : accha theek hai . Jaao!
Kanya looks shocked. Ranbir, mein tumhe dhoondh rahi thi.... jor jor se pukar rahi thi to yeh kaha
Ran : jaane do na! hoga kahi toilet mein .....to himself- who is he?
Kanya looks at Ranbir's tense face. tries to keep the mood light
Ran : actually mera sir phata ja raha hai. I'll go and sleep!
He gets up and goes to the room. Kanya follows him.gives him a tablet and water
Ran : tum bhi aao na ...
Kanya starts massaging his head! Ran feels better.puts his hand on her waist. kanya starts playing with his long hair.slowly she starts moving her hand on his face....one finger on his lips....
Ran : kanya, mein soya nahi hu. I know tum kya kar rahi ho.....pulls her down and kisses her .....
Kanya is fast a sleep, ranbir gets up.... takes his laptop.....starts writing....
suddenly gets up... comes down and goes towards the gate.
Ran : security,
Sec : ji saab
Ran : kal raat yeha koi ayaa tha?
Sec : ji nahi saab. gate to locked tha.
Ran : ek goongi aurat ayi thi... jo dopaharmein bhi ayi thi...
Sec : ji nahi saab mein to duty pe sham ko aaya. woh subahwala gav chala
Ran : to tumne uss aurat ko nahi dakha? kaale kapade the uske!
Sec : nahi saab yeha koi nahi aaya!
He goes out. There r a few slums outside. a few ladies r washing clothes .
Ran : Kya yeha koi goongi aurat raheti hai?
Lady1 : Nahi saab . yeha to hum rehete hai
Ran : To koi Goongi aurat aati hai?
Lady2 : Nahi saab. koi nahi
Ran : Kal koi black dress peheni aurat ayi thi?
lady 1 : nahi saab yeha koi nahi aya?
one old lady comes out .
Ran looks at her. she is not the one....
Old lady : kya hua saab ? kisko dhoondh rahe hai?
ran : ek goongi aurat ko
Old lady : arre woh goongi? woh to yeha reheti thi. par 8 saal pehele mar gayi
Ran : Kya?.... aise kaise ho sakta hai?
Old lady : Nahi saab. woh to mar gayi.yehi rastepar.... accident hua tha....aag lag gayi thi....... saab aap ne usse dekha?
Ran : ha!
Old lady : tab to yeh baat sach hi hai
Ran: kaunsi baat?
Old lady : Log kehete hai.... uski atma yehi hai.... yeh aapka farm house.....yeh koi nahi kharidta tha.... aap Delhise ho na.... aapko pata nahi...
Ran : main nahi manta aisi baatonko...... stupid.....
Ran returns to the house! sits in the hall starts TV
Good Morning
Today's main news :
Prime Minister has said Reservation policy will not change
India has won the Sydney cricket test
30 people died in the Express High way Tragedy
and Breaking News for Today NATASHA RETURNS.......
Ran gets up straight ... listens to the news.....stares at the TV screen
they show all the details of how Natasha has injured an old lady and a young man..... mom in law and husband of a young woman.....the previous night.... the young woman tells in tears how they were torturing her for she delivered baby girl second time....muze aur koi rasta hi nahi tha.... Natasha didi ne meri madad ki.....
the husband in tears accepts his fault and promises to take care of all 3! his eyes clearly show the fright for Natasha!!!!!mein galat tha....mein galat tha. I love my wife.... I love my daughters.....he looks frightened......
Somone keeps hand on Ran's shoulder! Ranbir gets a shock? Kaun hai?
Kisses her ... a bit forcefully.....kanya is back to her senses.......gives a smile.....
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EPISODE 11
Ran and
Ran : Dekho tum uske baremein ab sochna band karo. Tum aaram karana chahati ho na? bas.... so jaao!
Ran : Kanya... tum yeh kya soch rahi ho? dekho mein aaj hi humari investigating team ko uske peechhe lagata hu. ho sakata hai usse koi problem hai to hum uski madad zaroor karenge. par uske khatir tum itni pareshaan mat ho yaar....
dekho jara apna chehera aine mein... kaisi dikh rahi ho? kyon itna tension le rahi ho? kya abhi bhi muzpar naraaz ho...
Ran : To mera gift kaha hai?
ran : Kyon tum to tumhare saare tensions muze gift karane wali thi... par I know tum aaj bhi muze paraya samaz rahi ho...
(.She closes her eyes) kya kahi muze cancer wancer to nahi hua hai na?
Ran : Oh My God! Cancer aur tumhe? paagal ho gayi ho kya? ek baat kaan kholkar sunana... tumhe koi beemari nahi hai... arrre kisi beemariko tum tak pahuchne thodehi dunga main? i am very strong u know...
Ran : ok muzpar vishwas nahi hai.... theek hai abhi tumhari baat main doctorse karwata hun! woh batayenge to wishwas karogi?
Her eyes get full of water. she tries to stop the tears. closes her eyes.
Ran comes closer. kisses the 2 drops just coming out...
Ran : Ha Kanya,… dekho main pareshaan hun! ... muze bhi samaz nahi raha hai ki woh aurat kaun hai.... kyon baar baar humain mil rahi hai.... main pata karaneki koshish kar raha hun. but believe me I feel she is no harm. meri andar ki awaz ye keheti hai ki woh aurat acchi hai. she is a good soul!.
Tum please tension mat lo. Muzpar bharosa karo....aur bas muzse pyaar karati raho.... meri takad bano…tum mere paas hoti ho, saath hoti ho to mera confidance aur badhata hai….tum aisi rone lagati ho na to muze bahot taklif hoti hai....
Takes her in arms. Kanya feels better. holds him tight.
Ran : Aur kaske pakdu? dekho dard hoga.
kya kar rahe ho?
Ran : Bano mat.... tum wohi chahati ho.....zoothi....
She smiles
Ran : aisihi hasati raho jaan! yeh tumhari hasi paagal bana deti hai muze...
Ran kisses her... soft ... romantic ...( sasoko sasomein dhalne do zara... at the background...)……
Just then Kanya’s mobile rings….
Yeh mobile bhi na…
Ran : Yeh Pooja bhi na… six maarne jaao aur hit wicket hoo jaao!
Pooja : Kanya, tum kya kar rahe ho waha? News nahi sune? Aur Ranbir kaha hai? Wahi hai na! abhi kuchh bola woh!
Pooja : Kya? Is he mad? Jara Phone de do usko
Takes phone in one hand and pulls Kanya with other hand and takes her in arms !
Ran : Ha bolo Pooja ab kya hua?
Pooja : Ranbir, tum ye kya kar rahe ho?
Ran : Highlights dekh raha hu. ( Ran observes Kanya’s face… starts moving his finger on her face… whispers in her ears “highlights”… eyes, nose… comes to her lips….)
Pooja : Kya? Highlights?
Ran : ( takes his lips on Kanya’s) Arre hum jeet gaye na….( Kanya is totally collapsing…..)
Pooja : R u mad? Natasha is back!
Ran ; yes I know!
Pooja : ( Loudly) she has attacked 2 people yesterday night. I have told u….i myself have sent her a mail. She can attack u
Ran pulls Kanya on him
Ran : already attack kiya hai
Pooja : (Shouts) Kya?
Ran : Oh I mean
Pooja : Ranbir, stop this nonsense. Just listen to me. Agar tumhen murrne ka shauk hai to bhale hi murr jaao par
Ran ; main to already murr hi chukka hun! ( He is lying on bed and kanya is on him. he winks his eyes.she smiles. Ran starts playing with her hair falling on her face)
Pooja : Ranbir I think u have gone mad!
Ran : Actually yes! U r absolutely right!
Pooja : dekho I am coming there to get Kanya back… phir tum jano aur tumhara cricket!
Ran : Kya ? Tum Yeha aa rahi ho?
Pooja : Ha! Aur saath main Shantu aur Mallika aunty ko bhi la rahi hu!
Ran : Theek hai . AA jaao. Sab milkar Natasha ka swagat karenge!!!! Starts laughing!
Pooja : (gets wild). Kanya ko phone de do!
Ran : Actually woh iss haalatmein nahi ki phone le le!
Kanya gets up… yeh kya keh rahe ho? Takes phone
Pooja : Kya hua tumhe?
Ran whispers yeha… yeha… yeha…pointing ……!!!!
Pooja : Tumne muze chup kaha?
Pooja : Dekho Kanya, tum dono wapas aa jao! Natasha se tumhe dhokha hai….
Pooja : Kanya, yeh Ranbir ne kuchh liya hai kya? Mera matlab is he drunk?
Ranbir listens …. Usko bolo Meethi Chaay pi li hai…
Pooja : Kya? Meethi Chaay? To Chaay tikhi kabse banane lagi? Kanya, tumne bhi uske saath li to nahi?
Ranbir listens it…. Takes phone : ha Pooja ab to Kanya bhi lene lagi hai……
aur mein phone rakh raha hu! Bill bahot badh raha hai! From this month my company will not pay
Takes Kanya closer… chalo ab tumhari behenko bhi pata hai… tum mere saath kya kar rahi ho…….pilana to padegahi tumhe…… she smiles… Ran locks her lips into his….
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Break ke Baad ..........
Ran and
Ran : Kanya, ab achhi bachhiki tarah khana theek se khao. dekho wapas woh chakkar wakkar nahi chalega!
Ran : Tumne woh tonic to le li na.... bhookh badhneki?
Kan : ha baba le li.
Ran starts eating... obseves Kanya....thinks to himself... she is so innocent...her eyes speak for that! woh aurat sach much kaun hogi? woh kaise janati hai Natashako... Kanyako to firse bulane aayi thi woh... achha hua jo
kanya moves her hand in front of
Ran : Oh! main to tumhe dekh raha tha.
Ran : Batau? un.....( When he is observing her... suddenly he sees something moving in the garden behind her back......appears to be shadow of something!Ran gets up
Ran : Kuchh nahi. Tum yehi baitho. Main jara garden jaa kar aata hu!
Ran : Kanya yehase hilna nahi. Main abhhi aya!
Goes out in the garden
Ran : Kaun hai? shouts again .... Kaun hai?
security.....security....
Sec : jee saab
ran : abhi kaun aya tha idher?
Sec : koi nahi saab.
Ran : (catches his collar) .zooth bol rahe ho.
Sec : Par saab gate to abhi bhi locked hai. Kal jab aap woh sub bole to
Ran : Janwar? do pairowala janwar.....?
shouts ..... mali....mali....( The gardner comes )
Mali : ji saab
Ran : kya yeha janwar aate hai?
Ran : to bolo is gadhese... koi chor aya tha abhi yeha. aur yeh keheta hai janwar! jaao abhi . dhoondho... kaun aya tha. mein poolice ko phone lagata hu....
ran is thinking to himself.... kuchh to gadbad hai. muze to ab iss security pe shaq ho raha hai. I should contact the agancy immediately.but who was that?
returns to dining.
Kanya, dekha tumne....zaroor koi chor tha !
Looks at dining table..... Kanya is not there......
Kanya...... Kanya.... runs to the kitchen..... she is not there..... goes to the bed room ..... she is not seen.....not in the bathroom.......comes back to the garden......shouts... mali.....mali...... udher memsaab hai kya?
Runs to the gate. oh God yeh security to....... again shouts Kanya.....
Rings her cell no.
Of ho kanya uthao! just pick up the phone! ..... no reply.......
Ranbir is totally disturbed now! again runs back to the house......ramu chacha's bhanja is cleaning the dining table.
Ran :arre , madam kaha gayi?
Bhanja : woh to aapke peeche peeche hi gayi
Ran :Kya? Tumne dekha?
Bhanja : Ha saab !
Ran ; Kya? tumne roka kyon nahi?
Bhanja: Ji? main?
ran realises he said sumthing stupid. Oh God! muze kuchh samaz nahi raha hai? where is Kanya? woh kaun tha gardenmein? kahi Main baahar
his phone rings
Ran : Hello! kaun? Pooja?
Pooja : Ranbir, kanya ka phone switch off hai kya? utha nahi rahi!... dekho usse tayyar reheneko kehena. tum aao ya na aao! Main aur Shantu usse wapas la rahe hai. we r reaching in 15 min. ask her to be ready!
Ran : ( In Tears) Pooja but........call end kiya... kya karu main? kaha dhoondhu main isse?
goes out.....gets depressed.....sits down on the bench. his eyes start watering.... kanya yeh kya ho jata hai tumhe? kaise theek karu mein?ab to mera dimaag hi kaam nahi kar raha!
something touches his foot... looks down.... it's a burnt candle !
End of Episode 11
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Episode 12
Godbole House. Pooja and Shanta r in a hurry to go .
Pummy comes out in hall.
Pummy : arre tum dono kahi ja rahe ho?
Pooja : un... un.. actually...nahi mumma... hum to aisehi ghoomne nikle the
Pummy : Ghoomne? iss dhoopmein?
Anand comes from outside...Oh my god! kya dhoop hai baahar! arre Pooja aaj office nahi gayi tum? kahi ja rahe ho kya?
Shanta : Woh actually kya hai na hum sabji laane ja rahe the
Pummy : Hi Rubba! yeh kya ho
Aapki tabiyat kharab hai kya?
Shanta : arre muze kya hua hai! tabiyat khrab ho mere dushman ki!
Pummy :to aap yeh sabji laane ke kasht kaise utha rahi hai?
Shanta : arre pummy !
Pooja : ha Mummy aaj woh Shantu muze training denewali hai..... How To Choose Sabji!
Pummy : Accha? to chalo main bhi aati ho tum donoke saath..... Shantatai ka tractor sunane!
Pooja : Tractor nahi mumma..... lecture!
Pummy : of ho mera matlub wohi tha! Lecture ! chaliye saath chalte hai!
pooja : Nahi mumma... aap kyon aa rahi hai? hum chalte hai na...
Shanta : Ha Pummy tum aayi na to sabjiwala sabji mehengi dega... muze woh sastemein deta hai....
Pummy : Kyon ? aap woh iss area ki Don hai kya?
Shanta : HuHAHAHA! ha Pummy mai Don Hu! aur main aaj uss Ranbir Nanda ko achha maza chakhane wali hu!
Pooja : Shoo!( whispers) Shantu yeh kya bol rahi hai?
Anand : Yeh Kya kaha tumne Shanta?
Pooja : kuchh nahi... Kuchh nahi Papa...woh
Pummy : ( Shouts) Pooja , kya karne jaa rahe ho tum dono? such such batao!
Pooja : Mumma... such keh rahi hu...Hum aise hi...
Pummy : Kya kar rahe ho tum Jamai Raja ke saath? Dekho agar tumne Jamai raja ke saath kuch ulti seedhi baat ki to dakhna! pehele hi itni taklif de chuke ho unhe!... batao kya karne ja rahe ho! tumhe meri kasam!
Pooja : Mumma....woh hum Kanya ko wapas lane ja rahe hai!
Anand : Kya? Pooja tumhara dimag to kharab nahi hua na! arre Kanya apne pati ke saath enjoy karane gayi hai aur tum...paagal ho kya!
Pummy : yeh shantatai to ... jaane do! par pooja tumhe kya hua hai? Dakho tum waha bilkul nahi jaoge....
Anand : Dekho yeh to unka baddappan hai ki unhone sab kuchh maaf karke Kanyake saath rishta nibhaya hai... to ab aap dono fir se unhe pareshan karenge!
Shanta : dekho hum waha jayenge!
Anand : waha koi nahi jayega! yeh meri last warning hai!
Pummy : ( Goes to the main door. stands at the door) agar tumhe jaana hai
to tumhe meri lash ke uparse jaana padega.... samaze?
( Pooja and Shanta look at each other and give a look of defeat!)
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AT the Farm House ........
Ranbir looks at the burnt candle.....he picks up the candle....looks at it
Ran : kaha ho tum Kanya? kahi uss aurat ne tumhen hypnotise to nahi kiya na! yeh kya ho raha hai tumhare saath....aur mere saath....yeh kaunsa imtihaan hai mere liye... kaha dhoondhu tumhe main....
uss din.... jab Kanya ko aur uske pariwaar walonko insult karke
" Tumehn Zindgi main koi aisi ladki milegi jyo tumhen pyaar ka matlab sikhayegi.... aaj yeh tumne jyo pyaar ki beijjati ki hai uska sabak tumhen zaroor milega!"
kya yeh uska asar to nahi.....par Kanya tum janati ho na... main badal chuka hun!I love u so much... main to apne aap se bhi Jyada tumse pyaar karta hu... i can't live without u! Kya mere pyaar main itni shakti nahi ki in saari mushkilonko woh paar kar de....
somone touches his shoulder.... he gets a shock
Ran : Kaun hai? .... Kya hua? ( Turns around )
Kanya looks at him.....he doesn't believe ... gets up. pulls her towards him
Ran : Kanya, tum wapas aa gayi?
Ran : matlab... tum kaha thi? ... Kabse mein tumhe dhoondh raha hu!
Ran : tum andar thi.... par
Ran : par
Ran looks at her..... Oh My God!.... Kanya..... Kanya....Takes her face in his hands.... goes on kissing her face everywhere...
Ran : Nahi main bilkul theek nahi hu! Kanya. tum nahi janati.... tumhare bina main ji nahi paunga.... yeh kya ho
chalo andar chalte hai....
Both come together to the dining!
Ran : Kya dekh rahi ho?
Ran : Kanya... yeh tum kya kar rahi ho? hum apne room mein chalte hai....
Ran : Kanya... yeh
Ran : (feeling very akward)... Kanya chalo na room mein jaate hai
Ran looks here and there... holds her hands..tries to get up...
.... Ranbir, muze yeh sab chahiye!....Goes close to him
( Whispers in Gabbarsingh's tone )
Yeh tumhari Aankhe muze de de Thakur!
aur yeh gaal bhi.... aur yeh smile bhi....
looking mischiviously into his eyes takes his hand towards her tummy!.......whispers into his ears.....Ranbir, doge na yeh sab .....bus muze yeh sub aise ka aisa chahiye.......
Ranbir looks at her.....he just can't believe....
Kanya, yeh........his face starts shining!starts smiling ... kisses her lightly.... and then lifts her ....
Ran : practice kar raha hu..... godmein uthane ki.....yaad hai Big D ne kaha tha....yeh to riwaz hai.....takes her to the room ! Kanya giggles.....
(Her ghadi badal rahi hai.... at the back ground)
Break Ke Baad :
Ran and
Ran : Kanya, idher dekho na!( moves her chin towards him!) Tum nahi janati Kanya, ki aaj tumne muze kitni khushi di hai. u r tooooo sweet! ( Kisses her on cheek, then on her lips) yeh .. yeh jyo baat hai na abhi kisiko mat batana! bada surprise denge! u know Mom to itni khush hogi! woh to kabse mere peechhe thi. par main to shaadi hi nahi karata tha! oh my God! it's such a nice feeling yaar.... my baby is in ur.....( goes to her tummy.... touches it softly...the kisses her tummy.......) Kanya, yeh pareshhan to nahi kar raha na tumhe?
Ran : Ha main bilkul paagal ho
Ran : Kya main cool.... u r telling me to cool down for such a hot news! u know ... mera bachha aa raha hai....Ranbir Nanda ka baccha .... ! U understand he is my ....
Ran : Nahi Nahi! Abhi to main ralax ho hi nahi sakta! see I'll work so hard now... more than what I was working! arre mere bachheko iss duniyaki saari khushiya ... saari mastiya.... uske saare khab ....aur Kanya, tum usse datogi nahi ha.... bolta hu.... tum moms na kabhi kabhi jyada hi strict ho jaati ho....it's not good for child psychology u know!
Ran : to kya main karata nahi tumhara khayaal? Oh madam, yeh to mera khayaal rakhne ka hi natija hai.... jara muh samhalke baat karna... nahi to itna khayaal rakhunga ki judwa paida honge.....
Ran : such kahu.... muze to beti chahiye....tumhare jaisi....sweet smile wali....seedhi saadhi.... saaf dilwali... aur apne papa se bahut pyaar karne wali!
ran : such kanya socho it's part of me growing in u. such a nice feeling! u and me r one now.....U ...Me ... and Hum...! ( Kisses her again on her lips)
Just then his mobile rings......
Of ho yeh mobile ..always wrong time... wrong place!
Hello kaun? oh Akash? Hi How r u?
Dr Akash : Ranbir, hi! kaise ho? did u see Anand?
Ran : ( Looks at Kanya) Akash yeha signal theek nahi hai.... main jara bahar jakar baat karata hu ... ( Goes out of the room in the passage)
Ha ab bolo.yes I met him. but all reports r normal. so he suggested we should continue with the treatment with the psychologist! of course I am taking her care.... may be once she develops confidence, she should be out of this
Dr Akash : That's good! I just thought of calling u for i just read one article in our medical journal...there is a Case Report.... some what similar case like ur wife...of course it is from Australia!
It's a case of split personality or u can say Multiple Personality Disorder. See Ranbir our usual tests may not detect any positive cause for this.... but this report says that they did some advanced genetic study of the patient.
Ran : What? I didn't get u!
Dr Akash : Genetic study! That is Chromosomal work up! See every one gets the genes from their parents....like a son looks like his father... that is because he gets his characters through the genes... it is actually the hereditary unit! so they studied the genes of this patient as well as of her mother and they have shown that both had a genetic problem.... the mother did have the trait...that means the mother had passed this gene to this girl and the girl was showing MPD! so in fact they suggest it could be a genetic disorder.... of course just with one case report no one can conclude.... it is just a suggestion! one needs more research!
Ranbir is totally shaken up! he is disturbed!
Ran : Akash tum yeh keh rahe ho ki yeh problem ma se bachheko ja sakati hai? yane mere bachhemein bhi....
Dr Akash : Yeh main nahi keh raha hu. yeh case report suggest karati hai. but it is not yet proved! anyway u just SMS me
Ranbir is in tears! yeh kyon ho raha hai mere saath?ek taref se Khushiya mere darwajepar khatkhatane lagati hai to doosri taraf se dimag par aisa bomb aake phtata hai ki mere brain ki to jaise chindhdi chindhdi ho jaati hai......
Kanyase itna pyaar ho
kabhi shaadi ....bachhe .... soch nahi sakta tha! aaj woh saari khushiya haste haste meri zindgimain saare rangoka indradhanush leke aayi to yeh genetic study ki itni badi bijli gir padi sirpar!
Kya kahu Kanyase? Kya batau usse? Kitni khush hai woh! Usse to yeh pata bhi nahi ki woh kiss beemari ki shikaar hai.....
His eyes fill with water....everything looks hazy... as if the whole future....?? a big question mark!
No I have to fight! Fight for my Kanya and for my baby! I am Ranbir.... The winner! Tum darana nahi kanya, main yeh ladai jeetkar rahunga!....yeh Natasha na tumhe taklif degi na mere bachheko! yeh ladai hum milkar ladenge... Natashako humari zindgi se bhagna hi hoga!
He feels better!
He turns around to enter the room .......looks at the door... to his surprise... in bold letters it's written on the door
NATASHA!!!
End of Episode 12
pisode 13
Ran Looks at the door.It's written NATASHA! He is scared. Runs fast into the room
Ran : Kanya.....
Kanya is lying on the bed. Gets up suddenly
Ran : R u Ok?
Ran : (takes her in arms) kuchh nahi hua. tumhe akele idher chhod
Kanya smiles! Ran looks at her. kisses her forehead!
Ran : bus aisi hasati raho. accha lagata hai. mere saare tensions tumhari iss ek hasi se koso door bhagate hai.
Ran : woh mera school ka dost tha. he is doctor in AIIMS! actually uss din tum behosh ho gayi thi to i had consulted him. Poochh raha tha tum theek ho na!
Ran : of ho! bataya na..... bhookhi reheti ho to kamjori se chakkar aati hai tumhe! dekho Kanya, ab yeh tumhare khane peeneke naatak nahi chalenge!ab to apne liye nahi... par isske liye to khana hi padega! aur meri har baat sunani hogi. main ab ek tumhere khane peeneka time table hi bana deta hu. u have to follow it. Ok?
Ran : acchi dikhogi! Khate peete ghar ki lagogi! phir Somaliya bhi nahi jaana padega! Ranbir Nanda ki queen lagogi! Meri princess ki mummy lagogi!
Goes into his arms.closes her eyes. and sleeps like a baby!
Ranbir to himself - ha kanya, mein badal
aaj ki yeh baccheki khushi mere aaj tak ke saare achievments se badhkar hai!
looks at kanya's face. she looks very calm! he tries to take out his hand under her head. strokes her head and makes her sleep. her head moves.her eyes roll from side to side....her lips start shivering..suddenly her face appears hard! he strokes her cheek softly. so jaao... so jaao....! next moment...
Kanya suddenly gets up......clinches her teeth... tightly closes her fists.....her eyes look red.... Ran is shocked.... Kanya... Kanya... uth jaao!... idher dekho... baba...kanya....kya ho raha hai? koi sapna dekha kya? kanya... r u alright? ... he turns her face towards him... dekho idher....dekho....kya baat hai? kya ho raha hai..... tum darr gayi ho kya? arre main hu na! mere hote hue tumhe kuchh nahi hoga.....
He sprinkles some water on her...she is back to her senses!
Ran : tumne shaayad koi boora sapna dekha tha!
ran : arre yeha to koi nahi ayya....
starts shouting... she becomes hysteric !
Ranbir woh woh boli yeh Natasha ka baccha hai... ranbir woh mera baccha le ke jayegi... Ranbir yeh mera bachha hai... mera hai yeh! batao na ranbir woh kyon keheti hai yeh Natasha ka baccha hai? yeh to humara hai......phir Natasha ...yeh natasha kaun hai? woh aurat kaun hai? Ranbir.... yah sab kya hai.... mera bachha.... mera bachha....starts crying
Ran : Kanya... Kanya.... shant ho jaao baba! arre tumne sapna dekha hai... abhi to hum dono baate kar rahe the... aur tum so gayee....main yehase baahar bhi nahi
Takes her in arms...strokes her ....dekho darrna nahi... main hu na.... tight pakdo muze... ab theek lag raha hai na....dekho... tum ab uss aurat ke baaremain sochna nahi.... ok? tum jyada hi kuch soch rahi ho.....dekho ab idher dekho...dekho baba....!
Kanya looks at him. she looks very pale.....her eyes look scared. he kisses her eyes...
Ran :tumhe mere upar poora bharosa hai na Kanya? to phir kyon darrti ho? tumhare yeh saare darr sare tensions muze de do....ok? kanya looks from the side towards the door
Ranbir takes her in arms... and looks towards the door.....those bold letters NATASHA on the door.....yeh sab kya hai, Ranbir? yaane woh yeha ayee thi.
par tumne dekhi nahi!
Break Ke Baad ...............
In a Hospital room. Kanya is sleeping on the bed. she is being given saline.Ranbir is sitting next to her bed, he is looking at her hand. then looks at the bottle . drop by drop the saline is going .......
Ranbir thinks to himself...yeh kya ho gaya... kyon yeh ho raha hai...his eyes fill with water...main ladneki koshish kar raha hu aur muzpar kuchh iss tarah se hamala hota hai ki poora toot pad jata hu...
par muze apna aapko samhalna hai... nahi to meri Kanya to....looks at her face. She is sleeping... her face looks calm! he goes near her. moves his hand on her face. tum pareeshaan mat hona Kanya! main hu na! goes more close to her and kisses her on lips!
Just then Pooja enters the room
Pooja : (Shouts) Ranbir, yeh kya kar rahe ho? R u mad? door hato!
Ran : Pooja please. jara dheere bolo. abhi to woh soyi hai.
Pooja : dekho, woh meri behen hai. main janti hu uska khayal kaise rakhna hai. tum yehase chale jaao! and thanks for all this mess up.
Ran :Pooja, yeh kya keh rahi ho tum? this is hospital. thoda to lihaj karo.
Pooja : dekho Ranbir,
Ran : Nahi Pooja.. Natasha se kya lene dena?
Pooja :
Ran : Holds Pooja and pulls her away! Please stop this nonsense talk! I love her . She is my wife and that is the fact! and she too loves me a lot. just get it clear once for all! kaha tha
Pooja : Kya hua hai Kanya ko? bus Chakkar hi to ayee hai na!
Ran : (Looks at Pooja and then looks down. takes a deep breath) we lost our baby!
Pooja: ( her mouth is open. eyes big and wide) Kya?
Ran : Ha Pooja, we lost him! his eyes start watering
Pooja : Ranbir, tum ....yeh kya keh rahe ho? How is it possible?
Ran : Yeh kaise hua ... kyon hua... bus ho
Pooja : Ranbir, meri samaz main kuchh nahi aa raha hai.
Ran : Dekho. yehi sacchai hai... but promise me tum yeh baat kissise nahi kahogi... na tumhare parentse na meri momse! sab pareshan hoge.... aur ha! Kanya se bhi nahi! woh to poori toot jayegi... kitne sapne dekhe the usne aur
Nurse enters. asks Ranbir to see the doctor in the office!
Ran : Main abhi aya! tum Kanya ka khayal rakhna. aur usse woh abortion ka bolna nahi. woh main samhal lunga!
In Doctor's cabin......
Doc : Hello Mr. Nanda, see this is the prescription. yeh medicines mangwa lena.
Ran : yes doctor. I'll just get them.but how is she now?
Doc : she is Ok. Dekhiye ek tarah se accha hi hua. u should look at it from other way Mr. Nanda. I know both of u feel very upset. ...but jab pregnancy ke itne initial stage main abortion hota hai to we consider it to be Nature's signal!
Ran : Kya?
Doc : Yes Mr. Nanda! that means there was definitely some problem... aage jake ho sakta hai bacchemain koi problem aa jati....to ek tarah se theek hi hua...and there is so much life ahead....aap donoka ghar bacchose bhar dene ki jimmedari meri hai....but don't take an immediate chance.... give the nature some time...
Ran : yes doctor! I just wanted to know... usska ek psychiatristke paas bhi treatment jaari hai. Kya kahi uss wajahse...
Doc : Ho sakta hai! u show me all the details of it... I'll let u know.but don't take too much tension... it is part of life. take it easy!
Ran : Yes doc! thanks a lot. may be what u said is right....ho sakta hai aage ja ke bachhemain kuchh...
Ran remembers Dr. Akash's article!kahi aisa to nahi ki yeh genetic problem kiwajahse... to theek hi hua...as doc says nature ne samhala hai.... so nature is with me!
Ran enters the room. Kanya is awake. She is sitting. Pooja is looking at her
Kanya : Ranbir, kya kaha doctorne? sab theek to hai na?
Ran : Yes absolutely!takes her hair behind from her face. main janata hu na yeh chakkar to tum muze darane ke liye karati ho! dekho itni list hai ab medicines ki...ab to khane peene ke saath medicines ka bhi time table banana padega muze!!!
arre baba haso jara! joke tha yeh mera!
Pooja, can u give us a minute?
Pooja is shocked. but goes out of the room
Kanya : Kya baat hai Ranbir? Kuchh serious to nahi?
Ran : Nahi Kanya...but one thing... actually u were not pregnant!
Ran : Ha Kanya! Shayad tumhe galatfaimi hui thi. we did not confirm also! par koi baat nahi... yeh jara chakkar wakkar kum ho gaye ki ...
Ran : ha baba, hota hai kabhi kabhi! muzse bahot pyaar karati ho na to tumhe aisa lagne laga tha... ki mera ansh tum mein ...
takes her in arms ... dekho bilkul fikr mat karana...ab to itna khyal rakhunga ki judwa hi paida honge! ..ab dekho idher.. aur thoda haso... bus thoda...arre main tension mein hu yaar! tumhari hasi to mere tension ki dawa hai na... phir haso na baba! please....
I love u ranbir...Par ek baat kahu...tumhe zooth bolna nahi aata...yeh tumhari badi badi aankhe hai na... chhote bacche jaisi... woh sub kuchh sach bol deti hai.... don't worry... main itna pyaar karungi...humare bahot saare .... tumhe beti....breaks down....she can't speak further....he takes her close to his heart... both cry in each other's arms.
Pooja watches from the door. her eyes too water...main such much blind hi thi Ranbir.....u r a winner.....both r real winners! Love is the winner! muze maaf karo....she leaves
Ran and
End of Episopde 13
Episode 14
Ran and
Kanya is in Hospital Room. She is sleeping. Ranbir is by her side.He is thinking to himself...
Aisa kya ho
Usske baad kanya slept and then she got up......Oh God! But she looked terrible! she says she heard the woman saying...the woman is dumb and deaf! so How's that possible? whatever it is, the fact is... ....Kanya had to suffer...yeh kya ho raha hai? kaise nikalana hai iss bhul bhulayyase bahar?...yeh PAHELI to aur bhi difficult hoti jaa rahi hai!
Pummi Anand and Shanta enter.......
Pummi : Arre kya ho
Ran : Ab theek hai woh! Thodi chakkar ayi thi. ek baar waise ghar pe bhi ayi thi .. bus waisi hi.
Anand : par uss waqt to admit nahi karana pada;
Ran :Actually we were alone at Farm House so I decided to admit.
Kanya opens her eyes!
Pummi : Kaisi hai tu Puttar? beta, theek to hai na? main to itni ghabara gayi thi jab Pooja ne bataya....
Kanya looks at her Mom. her eyes start watering....
Pummi takes her in her arms...nahi beta..rote nahi. kuchh nahi hua hai. chakkar hi to hai na! dekho ab main ayi hu na ... sab theek hoga!
Kanya starts crying more!
Pummi: Anand se ; Dekho ji ... yeh to sun nahi rahi....
Ranbir feels very sad....Pummy the mummy..jara please! main dekhta hu!
Shanta : Tu door hat Gende! yeh sab tumhari vajah se hi hua hai! tere yeh lambe baal dekh ke hi darr jati hai woh. chal tu door hat
Suddenly Kanya gets up! her face turns hard! she clinches her fists. looks at Shanta with a vague look! shouts loudly
Kaun hai yeh aurat? door ho jaao.baju ho jao.muze koi nahi chahiye. chalo saare chale jaao yehase.
Gets violent! Pulls away the needle and tubings in her hand..... muze kuchh nahi chahiye.... muze chhodo ... starts running towards the door....muze jaana hai .... looks at Pummy.. door hato.
Pummy : Kanya... kanya... beta arre main teri ma.....
Kan : meri koi ma nahi... meri koi ma nahi... mera koi baccha nahi....starts crying loudly....chhodo muze... mera koi nahi.... mera koi nahi..... nahi... mara koi nahi........muze jaana hai....
Ranbir takes her in arms....holds her tightly... Papa, jaldise nurse ko bulao....
Kanya... Kanya... dekho baba... arre main hu na.... she looks at him.....dekho idher... main hu na... dekho... sab hai tumhare.....
Kanya looks at him! Nahi yeh koi mere nahi.....looks at Shanta... issko hatao... yeh meri koi nahi... yeh yeh... shouts loudly.. yehi hai woh... Ranbir, yehi hai woh... yehi ayi thi uss din....
again becomes violent..... runs towards Shantatai as if to kill her.... .main issko nahi chhodungi... main issko nahi chhodungi.....tumne .. tumhine mera...
Ran holds kanya and keeps his hand on her mouth... takes her to bed...
The Nurse comes and gives injection.....
kanya lies on bed.....slowly she becomes quiet ...and sleeps!
Ranbir strokes on her head softly. Pummi and Anand r in tears. Shantatai is scared!
Ran : aap jaiye ! Main dekhta hu. woh thodi disturbed hai!
Anand : Ranbir bete, par aisa pehele to kabhi hua nahi. phir abhi achanak......
Shantatai looks at Ranbir.She then looks at Anand and Pummy. : Dekho Pummy muze lagata hai issko kuchh baharka hua hai. Yeh Farm house pe rahe na dono. Udher hi kuchh hua hai. Main janati hu ek tantrik ko! sab theek karega!
Ran gets wild! Shantatai, aap badi hai par please yeh nonsense baate mat kariye. dekhiye Papa, duniyake sabse acche doctorse mein ilaz karunga kanya ka. aap sirf yeh shantatai ko leke jaiye yehase!
Anand takes Shatatai away. Pummi is crying! Ranbir is worried.... yeh Shatatai ko dekhkar kya hua achanak Kanyako? ....actually she is so close to her! phir yeh itni violent kyon ho gayi? ... kya kahi Shantatai...........! He looks at Pummy....Pummy the Mummy, ek baat batana... yeh Shantatai ka ...kya baat hai? aap kuchh janati hai......
Pummy : main janati thi .....aap yeh poochhenge!....main janati thi..... par muze maaf karna puttar, main kuchh nahi janati....muze kuchh nahi malum.......she starts crying and leaves the room......
Commercial break............
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Kanya gets up. Ranbir helps her to sit properly. Gets Soup for her. Starts giving her spoon by spoon
Kanya looks at him.....looks into his eyes!
Ran : Kya hua? Le lo!
Ran :tum ab jyada socho mat. main theek hu. yeh soup pilo.phir araam karo.
Ran : shayad aaj! doctor was saying u r alright now!
Ran : tum chaho to
Ran : kitne dinno baad tumhe aise haste hue dekha! so sweet! achha lagta hai.....kisses on her cheek! bolo jana hai
Ran : of course! kahi gaye hi nahi hum shaadi ke baad!
Ran : Woh thode hi honey moon tha? woh to bus.......
Ran :kyon? wapas sharab pini hai? oh my God! kaisi gale padi thi mere!
Ran : Muze kya malum?
Ran : ( Smiles) tumhe lagta hai
Ran : jo tum kaho! jo tumhe accha lage.... bus aisi hasti raho......
Ran : kyon usske baremein bolti ho? dekho ab humari life main tum ho... main hu aur koi nahi... samzi?
Mallika and Pummi enter.
Mallika : arre wah! donoka ekdam romance chal raha hai!
Ran and
Pummy : kitni sunder jodi hai.... isiliye to nazar lag gayi kissiki!
Mallika : ha pummiji! main soch rahi hu ek badi si pooja rakh lu! in donoki shaadi ke baad to pooja rakhi hi nahi!
Pummi gets tensed up.... to herself... pooja yane diye jalenge... phir se kanyako ......Ji... Ji....ha ... Ha... rakhenge na pooja par usske pehele nazar utaar dungi main in donoki!
Ran realises Pummi's fear!
Ran : aap jo pooja rakhni hai rakh lena! hum dono to
Ran : arre
Ran : Tumhe to bus mere saath hamesha argument karana hi hai!
Mallika : arre bus bus... zagada mat karo. But accha laga! ab Kanya bilkul theek ho gayi....zagada jo karrne lage humesha ki tarah........
everyone laughs..............
Ran : Mom aap jara Kanya ke saath baithna. Main woh bill aur medicines ka dekh leta hu
Pummy : ji main bhi aati hu aap ke saath
Pummy and Ran go out of the room!
Pummy : Jamai raja, kya aap such much Kanyako Switzerland le jaa rahe?
Ran : Ha! Pummy the Muumy, wohi theek rahega!
Pummy : Ha ! yehi theek rahega! To Herself : to phir Kanya ko hom ki agni ko dekhna nahi padega...phir Natash ka yeh raaz logonke saamne nahi ayega!... par kab tak ... kab tak iss tarah se bachayenge hum usse?
Ran : Aap kyon pareshan hai Pummy the Mummy? main hu na...
Pummy : starts crying!
Ran : arre yeh kya kar rahi hai aap? main to aap ke bete jaisa aur aap muze pranam.....bus Pummy the Mummy aap meri thodi madad kijiye....
Dekhiye Mummiji, Kanya se agar koi sab se jyada pyaar karta hai to woh hai aap aur main! to kya aap nahi chahti woh theek ho jaye? to kyon? kyon aap chhupa rahi hai muzse? dekhiye yeh PAHELI muze chhudani hai.... par aap ke saath ke bina main kaise kar sakta hu? please! mummy, please for Kanya's sake......muze sab kuchh bataiye... sub such bataiye!
Pummy : ( to herself) kya batau inko? kaise batau? agar woh baat meri zuban par aayi to sub kuchh.... sirf ek Kanya ke khatir kya main baki saare bachhonki zindgi daav par laga sakti hu? aakhir main sab ki ma hu.... kya karu main? yeh kisi duvidha main pad gayi hu main? hey! Bhagwaan! koi raasta dikhaiye......she looks ahead.......shocked! .... arre aaap???
Ran looks ahead ............gets shock of his life........the same old lady of the Farm House standing in front of them!
End of Episode 14
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